After the last elevator pitch I took time to improve based on my feedback. I made sure to dress nicer in this elevator pitch. I also made sure to cut the introduction and get right into my pitch.
Hi Ashton, Great work with your second pitch. I thought you did a nice job improving from last time and you really listened to feedback to improve your style in front of a camera. Great work!
Hi Ashton,
ReplyDeleteGreat work with your second pitch. I thought you did a nice job improving from last time and you really listened to feedback to improve your style in front of a camera. Great work!