https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dTEemb9LlP4
On my last elevator pitch I received no feedback so I did not have anything specific I wanted to improve based on feedback. In general I wanted to be more dynamic and confident with the way I spoke. I also committed to memorizing my speech. I still had a slight pause where I forgot one part, but overall I felt like my last elevator pitch was better. Now that I am more confident on camera I would like to add hand motions.
Hi Ashton,
ReplyDeleteGreat idea of the stylist pen having multiple uses. That kind of invention would be very useful in my life and many others. I also liked how you took your feedback as motivation and used this feedback to make your pitch even better. Great work!
Hey Ashton,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job improving despite the lack of feedback. I too have found that I’m more confident on camera now, so I totally get where you’re coming from with that part. Memorizing my speech is something I’ve tried to focus on as well, and I think it can add a lot to the overall coherence of your pitch if you can go off memory.
Great work!
Nolan